[Margarete Koenen]

Very nice drawings and convincing graphic novel style. It would be better if the colors where lighter, especially in the slides that are meant to be hopeful and show a new way of doing things. The colors could also be friendlier.

Also, remove the color hex values from the slides.

[Renuka Agarwal]

I also feel that the color palette is very similar across the slides. I think the second slide, “The Problem – Techno-feudalism,” should use darker tones (like black or gray), whereas the other slides, which are more hopeful, should be more colorful and vibrant.

[Owen Garcia]

The first slide after the introduction has the header “Mamdani Transition” and shows a graphic displaying monopolies’ negative impact on communities. I worry this could be misleading, as it may accidentally imply that the goal of the Mamdani Transition is for these communities to continue to be harmed by these monopolies when it is, in fact, the opposite.